That's looking pretty neat.

Not to be a pain, but Tattoine is spelled wrong. It's "Tatooine".
There's a couple small grammar things, too, but I won't get into that. Sorry... I don't mean to be a jerk, I just do a lot of writing so I just happen to notice things... ^^;;
"There's one, set for stun!"
"Look sir, NERF darts!"